初三英语作文：My old house
I lived in a small village before I was ten. Then my father found a job ina city near the country, so all my family moved to the city. Today I still
clearly remember the time when I lived in that village.
My mother worked in a tea-making factory. It was very small, and only
employed thirty workers. The factory building was divided into two parts. The
first floor was larger, with lots of machines. The second floor included about
ten rooms. Some were used as offices; the others were used as bedrooms for
workers.
We lived in one of these rooms. Although it was very small, it was
comfortable. We loved each other and lived happily. The room was always full of
laughter.
There was a hill of bamboo near the building. This kind of plant is green
and straight. Also it looks neat, especially after it rains.
In front of the building my mother built a vegetable garden. She grew
plenty of vegetables and fruit there, such as cabbages, carrots, potatoes,
watermelons, eggplants, and tomatoes. So we didn’t need to buy vegetables from
the market.
It is a long time since I left the village. That was really the most
pleasant time in my life, because of the sunshine, the bamboo, the flowers and
the people.
教师评语：
I love your vivid(生动的) description! I think it would be even better to live
there. It seems very peaceful. I don’t know why. Maybe gardens make things
peaceful. My mom also has a garden in summer that is full of asparagus(芦笋),
flowers, eggplants, beans, pears, and tomatoes! So, I love gardens! So I like
your story.
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