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怎样写好文章的开头
开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相，它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好，就意味着有了良好的开端，也就成功了一半。Good
beginning is half done，我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?
1. “开门见山”式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
①. 对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last
month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there.
What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited
us.
②. 对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”
的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think
so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but……
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget
(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、
exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to
Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was
really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting
Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is
……再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad,
why not consider Singapore?
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves
(捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though
my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a …
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发表于 2016-7-29 16:21:40