人大附中中考英语作文复习系列1：假日活动类

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        假日活动类（志愿者活动）
       
        　　寒假快到了，学校志愿服务组正在招募志愿者，活动地点有：an old people's home, a city park, the Children's Hospital, an after-school care center, and animal hospital. 假如你是李明，请你写一封自荐信。
       
        　　注意：文中不得出现真实的校名；字数不少于60词。
       
        　　内容包括：
       
        　　1.择两个活动地点并说明你能做什么。
       
        　　2.你能参加此次活动所具备的条件。（如：你的爱好、特长、性格特点和可能参加的时间等）
       
        　　3.对参加此次活动的看法、感想。
       
        　　参考词语：be interested in, sing, outgoing, spend, think
       
        　　Dear Sir,
       
        　　I am Li Ming, a student from Class Five, Grade Nine. ______
       
        　　写作提纲：
       
        　　1.提出意愿，表明选择的地点。
       
        　　I'm interested in this campaign and I'm willing to be a member of those volunteers.
       
        　　I'm writing to apply for the volunteer job to help in…
       
        　　Having heard that volunteers are wanted, I'm interested in it and I'm eager to be one of you.
       
        　　I've just learnt that you have a volunteer project./I heard that volunteers are wanted, and now I'm writing to join the campaign.
       
        　　I am writing to recommend myself as the right person in the voluntary work.
       
        　　I've learned that volunteers are wanted and I'd like to devote myself into the campaign and I think I would make the right person you need.
         

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        　　2.结合主题自荐参加此次活动所具备的条件。（爱好、特长、性格、时间等）
       
        　　I am kind, energetic and easygoing. I usually take care of my 80-year-old grandfather on weekends, so I'm experienced in looking after the old.
       
        　　They will be delighted being with me, for sure.
       
        　　I love animals and I can put this love to good use by taking care of them in an animal hospital.
       
        　　With enough patience, I bet I'll be qualified to do that well.
       
        　　I don't have any after-school classes, which makes it possible for me to spend plenty of time with …
       
        　　I am always getting along well with little kids. Spending time with them can make me happy as well.
       
        　　Another thing I think I can do is to…...
       
        　　Doing … is also a good choice. ///I don't mind how hard it is,…
       
        　　I used to have two dogs, by taking care of which I ….
       
        　　I'll try my best to… even if it takes a lot of time.
       
        　　I'll treat them as my own.  // Keep it as clean as possible
       
        　　3.对参加此次活动的看法、感想。
       
        　　Being a volunteer is GREAT!  (It's also a major commitment.)
       
        　　I think it will be a good way to benefit both the volunteers and the people who are helped.
       
        　　It can not only enrich our experiences, but also make me more outgoing. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
       
        　　It will not only provide me with an opportunity to care for others, but help me learn more about our duty as well. It will be an unforgettable experience for me.
       
        　　It will provide us with a special/ valuable experience, which I cherish / value.
       
        　　Spending time volunteering instead of staying at home will make my summer vacation more meaningful.
       
        　　Tired but happy, I cherish it a lot. Advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
       
        　　How nice it would be if I could offer me this change.
       
        　　I consider it nice to help others, so I would be really happy if you could offer me this chance.
       
        　　I consider it great because we can not only develop our social abilities but also put our hobbies / strengths to good use. This is a good chance as well as a challenge.
       
        　　一些好句式：
       
        　　o    More and more people/   the more…. the more…
       
        　　o    Not only… but also
       
        　　o    Only…. can I ….
       
        　　o    Put… to good use by doing…
       
        　　o    …. makes it possible for sb. to do…
       
        　　o    Being …. is sth. that people can't not imagine.
       
        　　o    On the one hand, … on the other hand…
       
        　　o    First of all, … secondly,… thirdly…, last but not least,…./First, then, after that, next, in the end/ finally
       
        　　o    ….. , which….    /   …. where/ that/ which/ who…
       
        　　o    It's …. for sb. to do sth.
         

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        　　习作1：
       
        　　Dear Sir,
       
        　　I am Li Ming, a student from Class Five, Grade Nine. I'm writing to apply for the volunteer job you organized this summer vacation.
       
        　　First, I consider volunteering in an after-school care center will suit me just fine, because I'm outgoing and I'm good with children. From my point of view, I can put my strengths to good use by singing and reading books with the children, which will sure provide a happy and meaningful time for both of us. What's more, I'm patient enough to take care of the old, so it's a good idea to volunteer at an old people's home, where I'm going to chat with them and go out of my way to make them feel at home.
       
        　　Being a volunteer is GREAT! There is no denying that my coming vacation will be full joy. Let me join you, please. Offer me a chance and I will return a surprise. I'm looking forward to your kind reply.
       
        　　习作2：
       
        　　I heard that volunteers are wanted so I'm writing to join the campaign. I'd like to clean the city park and work in an animal hospital. If I can do that, I'll try my best and clean it thoroughly. As for working in an animal hospital, I can help vet caring for the animals. It's always a pleasant thing for me to get along with animals. I think I have several strengths to be a volunteer. First, I'm willing to clean out environment we rely on. Secondly, I love animals. Thirdly, I'm quite an outgoing person and I will spend my spare time helping others.
       
        　　I really like the voluntary activities because they give me a chance to spare no effort to do something meaningful.
       
        　　我的习作：
            请同学们也自己写一篇作文，应用好上面给的优秀的句式。